In order to obtain insightful, critical, helpful and valuable peer feedback regarding my depth study, I created a survey with yes/ no style questions to obtain general feedback from individuals who have read through my depth study. The following are the results;
The responses and feedback collected from the online form was extremely insightful, critical, helpful and valuable as each response highlighted areas in my investigation that needed to be improved as well as what areas were successful. In order to address the feedback, I have made alterations to the following areas of my depth study;
- I have included statistics as a part of my background research. These are important as they effectively illuminate the current data regarding individuals who have this disease and additionally add more credibility to my research.
- I have included much more diagrams, tables and images to act as a visual aid, assisting the portrayal and understanding of my research.
- I have re-visited my original aim and created a more thorough one, in order to clear mis-understanding regarding the purpose of my investigation.
- I have added comprehensive information regarding specific factors that affect bone health in the Bone Mineral Density section of my background research.
After making these changes, I feel extremely confident in my depth study in regards to the information presented, the way it is presented, and in achieving a comprehensive understanding of my topic and inquiry question.
